From a historian's standpoint, composite characters
are acceptable, provided their words and actions are broadly consistent
with real people. Brighton, for example, is well-drawn.
The scriptwriter's dramatic themes and
'interpretation' are a different case. They are sometimes far less
obvious and therefore - given the persuasiveness of the medium - more
troubling.
There is no victory
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A glorious and untarnished victory held no
attraction for a scriptwriter with Robert Bolt's anti-war
convictions
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To avoid that, he made hubris/nemesis a key
dramatic theme, using it on every level (e.g. the second part
offsets the first)
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This not only led to invention (e.g. Daud's death
to offset the capture of Akaba) but also to serious historical
misrepresentation. Both directly and by example, the Arab Revolt had
lasting and positive effects, whereas the film represents it as a
wholly empty victory
There is no hero because war is morally corrupting
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The interpretation of the massacre at Tafas is
Robert Bolt's. Doubtless it appealed to his personal anti-war agenda
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He makes Lawrence responsible for the massacre,
representing him as a person degraded to animal level by blood-lust
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To prepare the audience for this, Bolt inserts
disquieting dialogue earlier in the film, notably the invented
confession by Lawrence that he had enjoyed executing Gasim
British imperialism was evil and manipulating
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Both Wilson and Bolt held strong political views
about British Imperialism. This is reflected in the final script,
though Wilson's original treatment, written from an American
viewpoint, may have been more extreme than Bolt's
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The film suggests that Lawrence was an oddball,
cynically exploited both by the British and by Feisal. Some
post-film writers have echoed this interpretation, though it has
little basis in historical records
Ambivalent sexuality
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The screenplay was written 5-6 years after
publication of Richard Aldington's Lawrence of Arabia, which
claimed that Lawrence was homosexual
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Richard Meinertzhagen had meanwhile inserted in his
Middle East Diary (1959) a claim that when he first saw
Lawrence, he had asked himself: 'Boy or girl?' This diary entry,
almost certainly a post-Aldington invention, was widely reported at
the time
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Unsurprisingly, the film-makers were influenced
by these claims - most obviously in the portrayal of Lawrence in
Cairo in 1916
Deraa is the key
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In Seven Pillars, Lawrence portrayed the
Arab Revolt as a triumph for the Arabs, but a tragedy for himself
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Lawrence clearly set out two elements that
contributed to the personal tragedy: first and most important, the
increasing dishonesty of his role vis-à-vis the Arabs, and secondly
his reaction to male rape at Deraa. Bolt chose to use only one of
these: Deraa
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This distortion has influenced many subsequent
writers
Masochism
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Robert Bolt felt that he was on sure ground in
representing Lawrence as a masochist - and decided that this was the
case even before the Arab Revolt
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This interpretation - for which there is no
convincing evidence - has subsequently appeared in numerous
biographical articles as well as books
Egomania - "Who am I"
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Given Bolt's pacifist convictions, one could
hardly expect him to represent Lawrence as a nice person
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Part of what A. W. Lawrence called a 'character
assassination' was the portrayal of Lawrence's 'egomania'. This
reaches its peak of absurdity when he declares the Revolt in Deraa
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This dramatic theme completely reverses reality -
Lawrence's deepening sense of personal responsibility for what he
called the 'rankling fraudulence' of his role
Lawrence running out of men
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A mistaken theme in the drama is that - because
Arab tribesmen went home after raids - Lawrence's revolt was
conducted with smaller and smaller Arab forces
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At a very local level, this was occasionally
true. In a larger sense, it was not. As the revolt moved northwards
it called on tribal forces hitherto unused
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Moreover, the Arab Regulars were, by 1918, an
effective force
It is one thing to argue that historical fact may be
sacrificed for the benefit of dramatic art. It is quite another to
disregard historical fact altogether.
Lawrence of Arabia contains many errors in chronology
and geography, often for no significant reason. The scriptwriters
give the impression that they think their art is above such
trivia.
Yet artistic freedom, like free speech or freedom of
the press, can be abused.
All that said, if David Lean's Lawrence of Arabia had
been a less successful film, I would not be giving this talk - and many
of you might not be interested in Lawrence. In that sense, the film can
be compared with the sensational 1919 lectures given by Lowell Thomas.
I will end where I began. How accurate do you think
it is?

Smith in the Desert

Like Seven Pillars of Wisdom, David Lean's Lawrence of Arabia
takes place during WWI, beginning in Cairo and ending in Damascus -
passing by way of Akaba, Deraa and Tafas. As in Seven Pillars, the main
protagonists are British (Allied), Arabs and Turks.
But there, despite four characters based on real
people, the similarities end. If you bought a can labelled 'Baked Beans'
and it turned out to contain tomatoes, you would criticise the
labelling. Apparently, dramatic licence exempts 'historical' films from
the consumer protection laws that apply to most other things sold to the public.
Were that not the case, I doubt that this film could be titled Lawrence
of Arabia.
The film purports to be about real historical events.
It cashed-in handsomely on the popular reputation of a famous man. In my
judgment, it is inexcusably and often pointlessly inaccurate. It is
really no
defence to argue that there are also historical mistakes in Shakespeare.
Jeremy Wilson
March 2006

I was asked recently whether I think Lawrence of
Arabia is a good film. Considered only as a film, without reference
to history, the answer is surely 'Yes'. That said, I also think that it
is beginning to show its age.
The shame is that such magnificent landscapes,
acting, direction, photography, editing, music - and all the other
technical skills - were let down by a bad script. The drama that Robert
Bolt created owed hardly anything to Seven Pillars of Wisdom, and
a great deal to Bolt's personal prejudices. It was almost entirely
fiction - the drama of someone who never existed. There was drama enough
in the life of the real T.E. Lawrence without that kind of meddling.
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